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[Short Story] FOE ( Fan Fic)

Alpha Persei

Active Member
I have taken the story down for a bit of editing (maybe).
the story it was here. but after reading an encouraging comment . i think i have to change it up a bit .

i'll be back ^ ^
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Dr. Mafia

Well-Known Member
There are many spelling and grammatical mistakes.
The plot is not interesting in the slightest.
The formatting is literal garbage.
I'd put my money on @WinnerGR to write a better story. And, by the way Winner, I'm not encouraging you either.