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Story of My Town

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Welcome!! I am QueenLP, ruler of Quiet Cove. My forefathers discovered our land centuries ago. Our people, with honesty, integrity, much hard work, kindness and concern for fellow citizens have transformed our land from it's humble beginnings to the city we now cherish. A small group of settler's journeyed to our shores to escape the tyranny and injustices to find a new land and establish a settlement where our people could pursue happiness and the opportunity to build a better life for their families, friends and neighbors. Nestled in the mist, the village of quiet cove was established with a single dwelling, and a town center for our people to grow and prosper together. In an atmosphere of kindness and tolerance and a willingness to help each other we began to grow and prosper, free from the wars and oppression of outside countries. And grow and prosper we did! From those humble beginnings, we have multiplied, built farms, churches, libraries, trading companies. Through research and hard work we he expanded our technologies an improved our standard of living. We have published books, grow food and produce he finest goods available. We have moved through many stages over time during what are now called iron, bronze, colonial, progressive, and into our current modern age. But we remain ever aware of our past history, for those who fail to learn from history will likely repeat it. The rulers who came before me established our city with the input, support, and hard work of our people and we share our successes and wealth with them. Our first churches have given way to beautiful cathedrals, our farms are now supplemented with cattle ranches that produce the tastiest beef. We now produce glass ,textiles, medicines, brass, tin, gasoline, salt, coffee, and rubber, and many other fine goods. We recognize the need to protect our people and maintain a highly trained military for defense purposes only. Although we enjoy good competition in the PvP tournaments to collect medals to expand our land holdings, we refrain from plundering goods from our neighbors unless they do so first. As times have become more complex our people requested to join a guild for mutual aid and support and that has enabled us to continue t grow and prosper. Our people are industrious, kind, honest, and generous, and on their behalf I extend a warm welcome....come and visit our city. Whether you stop by often or only occasionally you will receive our hospitality, see harmony and progress. But w strive to never lose the values of our heritage despite the rapid advancements in technology. So come to Quiet Cove for a visit and share in our serenity, joy, and peace! I am confident you will find the journey worthwhile.
 

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Eleuthera means freedom. Our city has been different from any neighbor’s, friend’s or guild mate’s cities since its humble beginning. We have strived to live in the Tao and Now and not worried about filling every square expansion with something productive. This is a city where one can live and not a city built on conquest or maximizing productivity. Every minute does not have to be accounted for.





This has led to a different city from the very beginning.



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A year ago Eleuthera was still holding the course.



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We can proudly say that we have taken our own path and have not been seduced by the obvious or easy route. We are the only Post Modern Era city that has zero Battles Won. This is only possible if one questions every easy assumption other cities lead you.

We are a city with no Military buildings for defense. This has freed up resources lending to a more open city. We have worked with neighbors from all over our World to reduce Plundering to where we have only been Plundered twice in the last 5 days.

We started the Good Neighbor Program. This program is designed to give neighbors needed coins, supplies & goods. We set up buildings to maximum production and set up a single rogue defender. This can really help a lower Age player when they can get 80,000 Supplies or 30 Goods that they need.

Though at first site one wonders how any progress is made. Eleuthera has reached the end of the PME Research Tree and is negotiating its last Map providence.

The biggest difference in our city is that it is a living and breathing population that has real growth pains. Things don’t change because of production needs – things change because the citizens and City Council make them change. For example: The city workers abandoned the Steel & Auto Factories for environmental & aesthetic reason . They were replaced by Tree Nurseries & Green Houses.

Modern Electronics gave us the opportunity to keep our citizens informed after the disappearance of our News Stands and Publishing houses. We now have a daily blog to keep folks up to date with current events.


The following is that blog. This is not a short story. Much is also missed when reading the blog if one cannot see what is happening in our city.

8/18/2014

The real world finally caught up with my little city. Everyone can't just serve ice cream or work in the trees.

The Bungalow folks have decided to open 2 Fertilizer Plants. I am a little suspicious of their intentions. Why would anyone want to open factories?

It could be the public schools. These kids are ill equipped for the social stresses of school when raised in a home school environment.

Or could it be that the folks with a golf course in their back yards think that they are special.

Everyone is enjoying the Telescope.

A Lifeguard course starts next week at the Academy Pool.
Lifeguarding course or Waterpark Skills module prerequisite skills:
1. Swim 300 yards continuously demonstrating breath control and rhythmic
breathing. Candidates may swim using the front crawl, breaststroke or a
combination of both but swimming on the back or side is not allowed. Swim
goggles may be used.
2. Tread water for 2 minutes using only the legs. Candidates should place their
hands under the armpits.
3. Complete a timed event within 1 minute, 40 seconds.
■ Starting in the water, swim 20 yards. The face may be in or out of the
water. Swim goggles are not allowed.
■ Surface dive, feet-first or head-
■ Return to the surface and swim 20 yards on the back to return to the
starting point with both hands holding the object and keeping the face
at or near the surface so they are able to get a breath. Candidates should
not swim the distance under water.
■ Exit the water without using a ladder or steps.

8/11/2014

My citizens shutdown the Steel plants and Auto factory. They only want to work in Tree Nurseries, Green Houses and a Toy Factory. This does make some sense – They still maintain 0 Battles Won. When Summer started the kids had 2/3 of the Golf Course into Public Pools. Poor kids – school starts soon. There is a movement to build a Cape. There will be a Zoning meeting before anyone can proceed.

8/12/2014
City Update

The Zoning Committee got out of control. Some folks just wanted a Cape. The Committee challenged the Home schooling done in the city and demanded that a public School & Academy be built. The kids agreed but wanted to keep a couple of pools for practice and meets. The committee also recommended that an Observatory be built before considering a Cape.

Many thanks to Brinn for the large contribution to my Observatory. Across the field from the Observatory is an innocuous Garden Cabin. This Cabin is the above ground entrance to a vast underground space port. Ender's Game type facility.


8/13/2014

The city is also out of Fertilizer. I think the folks are planning a general siesta.

8/14/2014 thru 8/18/2014

Blog Files are corrupted.

8/19/2014

The Suburbanites are getting nervous. 7 Blacksmiths showed up in the shadow of the Auto Factory. I thought that I saw building supplies disappear.

The Bungalow folks have set up road blocks on the trail between the auto Factory and their Bungalows. You can only guess at what this means.

There are 2 big positive with the Blacksmiths. The Fertilizer Plants have piped their methane exhaust to the Blacksmiths to run their smelts.

The Academy has set up a computer network that is running at 9600 baud. Zork has become the rage.


Update on computer network. It is 9600 at the Academy. The other folks tied into it get 1200 baud.

A special note of concern was taken when the Suburbanites started building a microbrewery. A spokeswoman for the Bungalows announced today that they were shutting down the Auto factory. The city had 4 auto fatalities last year with a 16,000 population. It has come to light that 1 of the 4 deaths is alcohol related.

In further response the Bungalows completed a trail system where their folks do not have to use or cross a 2 lane road.

8/20/2014

The use of drones & satellite video has changed the look of the Blacksmith Blockade. When 3 guys stand on the street with AK47s then a drone might show up . Well, if you look close at the sidewalk along the Toy Factory you will see two guys playing ball. Those folks have been here since yesterday. Do you really think that they are just playing?

“What about coming from the other way?” I noticed that there is a guy there who makes one “hole in one” after the other next to that trail. What if he had special balls that contained explosives? I would guess that he is pretty lethal.

On a lighter note:
The microbrewery is producing a nice IPA.
The Eleuthera Delis are now serving this native Kalik IPA.

8/21/2014

Well, all hell broke loose last night. It seems that the Bungalows bought a couple of the Suburbanite’s houses. They then replaced one with a bungalow and the other with an Herb Merchant. The Suburbanite then moved their Brewery. It is as if they drew a line in the sand.

The Zoning committee had an emergency meeting. It appears that some members of the council did not want the Herb Merchant selling so close to the school house. They proposed swapping the Academy and School house locations. In a surprise move the local college students supported the Zoning committee – they usually just protest. I guess the college kids just want to be closer to the golf course.



8/22/2014

While all attention was directed toward the new Herb Merchant – the Blacksmiths disappeared. There is now a large concrete area where they once were. The blockade is still in effect. Zeppelins have been seen landing and appear to be delivering supplies. But the tarmac is always empty when the Zeppelins depart.

There is a lot of traffic between the Brewery and the Herb Merchant. This surprises a few. On the plus side – tensions are easing.


8/24

To everyone’s delight a sidewalk was laid between the swimming pools. I believe the Pool Managers paid for it so the kids would not have to walk across the field when it was wet. There appears to be an ROI with savings from the cleaning service.

The Zeppelins have stopped delivering supplies. It has only been for a day – so it just might be their weekend or it could spell some other upturn.

I believe that I have found the Bungalow’s plans on Dunarsund. Check out Fritz_ on that World. There you will find the hologram of their intentions.
8/30/14

I had my second grandchild born today. It has been 22 years since the last one. J

The Auto plant was removed today. It will probably be rebuild with the new model year. The city council did some research and found that the factory was producing 1 car a second. That means that over 86,000 cars are produced every day for only 12,262 citizens. That works out to 7 cars a day per person. What are they doing with all these cars? Exporting? Driving them into the ocean to make an artificial reef? Al I can figure is that they are taking them apart as fast as they are being built. This city is into recycle and Green.


9/2

An unemployed Auto plant worker accused the city council of ‘Misuse of Data’, a serious crime in a technology driven society. The city councilman who reported 86,000 cars a day of production was watching the assembly line and saw 1 car pass every second. He them deduced that 1 car a second means that there are 86,000 cars are produced every day. What he didn’t realize was that the assembly line had the same cars going in a loop. In this small auto factory the cars keep going in loops while the robots add 1 component at a time until it is built.

The unemployed Auto plant worker also alleges that a bungalow “anti-car” fanatic did know that it was a Loop Factory and reported otherwise to get the Auto plant shutdown.

A new Metro entrance was constructed on the west end to many citizens joy. This now makes it easy to get to any part of the city on the Metro.

The newly erected Cape has some citizens concerned about its closeness to their houses. The dolphins and chimpanzees in the Zoo both registered their objections about being so close to the blast zone. The city council has countered that there is only one other city known to have a larger green zone than ours.

9/3

Zoo 1 Bungalows 0
Or is it that the Zoo won and the Bungalows have nothing. The city council moved the Observatory and Zoo to each other’s plot. The Zoo animals and their advocates are happy now. The Bungalows however are pressing for a more open dialog with the Cape folks. Some folks are talking about moving to another city.

The School just put in a loop drive to relieve congestion on the 2 Lane. The number of near rear enders in front of the school prompted the city council take this action.


9/4

In a move to placate her neighbors the Cape Canaveral officials bought out the closest bungalow homes to increase its green zone. Having to take this action has frustrated the officials resulting in the perceived retaliatory move of removing the sidewalk from the South end of the Cape.

On some positive notes:
Zoo attendance has increased by 18% since it moved closer to the schools. The kids say that the animals are calling to them with their rohisses, grunts, roars, snorts, hrows, growls, chirrups, chirps, twitters, tweets, whistle screeches, squeals, screeches, shrieks, squeaks, hoots, chatters, trills, mews, purrs, meows, miaows, hisses, yowls, caterwauls, clucks, cackles, bocks, crows, peeps, cockadoodledoos, pant-hoots, grunts, screams, moos, lows, bawls, bellows, yelps, cries, snarls, creak, caws, cahs, coos, cuckoos, pipes, bells, barks, woofs, arfs, bays, bow-wows, howls, yaps, clicks, brays, hee-haws, coo-coos, moans, rumbles, drums, chant, dooks, buzzes, hums, yelps, simpers, croaks, ribbits, gribbits, cackles, gobbles, hisses, honks, quacks, whoops, wails, bleats, baas, whines, pocks, pants, bellow, rumble, neighs, snorts, whinnies, nickers, sputters, hums, whoops, laughs, maws, warbles, bleats, bellows, chortle, gibbers, whines, pipes, coughs, sputters, lows, oinks, trills, geckers, bellows, gobbles and whoops. Oh, did I mention that there was a contest to name all the noises that animals make?

Also, the Observatory is experiencing a reduction in light pollution. They are so enthused by the increase of performance that they are starting a proactive campaign. They are asking city residents to help control light pollution.
· Use only as much light as needed for the task. Do not over-light.
· Shield or aim lights to prevent direct upward illumination.
· Turn off lights when not needed.
Use low-pressure sodium (LPS) lights to the greatest degree possible. LPS lights cause the least interference to the research of the Observatory.


9/6

As always, not enough information is the root of all misunderstandings. The Cape folks removed all the sidewalks coming to their facility. They have put a tunnel system feeding off of the current Metro to give them better security. The Bungalows living close were allowed to put in a trail to the Cape to save the long Metro ride. Things have settled down.

The Great Buildings have produced enough Industrial Era goods for trade to allow the city workers to replace the Fertilizer Plants with Tree Nurseries. Everybody prefers working in a Tree Nurseries.

9/7

The City Council expressed their concerns today about the unemployment rate of 1%. This is a result of the Cape’s green zone. The Bungalows that were bought out did not rebuild.

Some citizens are pushing for an amnesty for their Stone Age domestics and construction workers. It appears that the City Council is seriously entertaining a change in the law. Yereff and Boobawesome, 2 close city’s leaders, were asked to come before the council to address the illegal citizens concerns.

9/8

Word spread swiftly that our city was going to give amnesty. Our borders are fields, trees & a river did not stop the hoards. They are building huts on every clear piece of land. The Huts do not even care if their houses are attached to roads. They have not built in Central Park to the surprise of everyone.

The real surprise is that the city’s citizens have remained Enthusiastic. It seems the Suburbanites & Bungalows both like cheap house keepers and gardeners. The City Council on the other hand hates what this squatting has done to their well planed city.

9/9

Why Are the Huts Not Building in Central Park

It appears that the Huts all came from cities where every block of property had to serve some purpose. There were no playgrounds, pools, golf courses, schools or open spaces. Eleuthera has all that to offer and more. The enthusiastic population question has been answered. Using PME resources the Huts built Allotment Garden Sheds and are producing more fresh produce than the city has ever seen. The Hut housekeepers and yard men are bringing the harvest to their employers – the Bungalows & Suburbanites. That is one way to make everyone happy. Who complains to the person who gives you strawberries?

The City Council announced today that the borders are still closed and amnesty was not an option. In a closed door meeting it is rumored that they are considering building a single Council House to replace the 41 huts as a temporary solution.


9/10/14

A strange calm has settled over the city. The Huts moved to the new council house and their huts have been leveled. The City Council was going to level the gardens too but the city’s populace voiced their love of the fresh produce. Now, the City Council is looking into a way to keep the gardens but not having them placed willy-nilly around Eleuthera.

On another note – The Huts only received 7 coins production when they should have received 22 coins with the St. Mark’s bonus. It was first thought that the bonus did not apply to non-citizens but today the last hut is receiving the 22 coins every 5 minutes. There seems to be some problem with the fabric of our Universe.

9/12/14

The Suburbanites & Bungalows are not happy. There was never a time in their lives when they did not get their daily St. Mark’s bonus. There were so many Huts that the bonus was used up giving the huts an extra 17 coins. This resulted in some Suburbanites not get their 45,384 coin bonus. Now it appears that as soon as a Hut moves into the city and start building then a Suburbanite & Bungalow policeman picks them up and brings them back to the border. The council house is already full of Huts and some Huts have built and escaped the deportation.

The City Council in a bold move proclaimed that every Tuesday all citizens are required to carry Proof of ID. Individuals found with no ID are put in a holding cell for up to 3 days before being deported.

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As I said – Our city lives and breathes. She is a true gem following her own course and not limited by the archetypal approach of many cities.

Thank you for letting me tell you the Story of My Town,
Fritz_
 
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The Story of Sunnyvale Park

Part I of II


The armored war leader from the townbeyond the hills glowered at the massed and muddy group of malesettlers. A paltry forty in number, they gripped their spears(really just long sticks with one end sharpened, some held upsidedown), breathed heavily, and grabbed at each other as feet slipped inthe wet trampled earth of the impromptu practice field. The warleader raised a gloved hand and covered his eyes. His jaw, whatmovements of it to be perceived under the bristling black beard,clenched. “You may be,” he gravely intoned, “the worstfighters I've ever seen.” The settlers, who had arrived the yearbefore from over the mountains and into that empty water-fed grassyvalley on the continent of Korch milled and cleared throats, someyelped and fell in the mud, spears clattering.


“Um,” began the settler's leader, alean man of middling height and slender build, whose apparentyouthful appearance was betrayed only by gray hairs mixed among thedark brown of his closely cropped head. He took one step forward,using his spear as a cane on the treacherous earth, careful to keepthe mean end pointed away from him. “It's true,” he grunted,extracting his trailing booted foot from boggy ground with a suckingsound. “We're not great at the spears and stabbing-other-peoplestuff,” he said, wiggling his spear for emphasis. “We werefairly up front about that,” he said, a bit defensively.


“Which is why,” the war leader, atall and heavily built man, bellowed, “you got your collective butthanded to you in your former home and had to flee here!” Theassembled settlers flinched at the volume and terrible timbre of thevoice. But, they were also growing bored. It was only the gravityand implied threat of the armored and heavily weaponized war leaderand his men from the neighboring town that kept them in place. “IfI wanted to,” the war leader growled, moving a hand to the hilt ofhis sword, “I could single-handedly kill each of you right now andrid the land of--”


“Um,” the settler's leaderinterrupted, raising a hand and gingerly stepping onto the drierturf. The war leader's eyes glared at the other leader, who absentlyregarded the spear before dropping it on the grass and wiping hishands on his tunic. “You see,” he began, not noticing that thewar leader clenched his fist on the hilt of his sword. “You see,”the leader said again, raising his eyes to the war leader andbrightly smiling. The smile dimmed a bit seeing the other man'smalevolent expression. “Um, we're much better at other things. Things that let us survive for so long, until people who have nosense for finer things came along and messed up things for us.”


“What. Things?” the war leadergrowled, each slow syllable dripping with menace, his beard asbristly as a privet hedge and eyes narrowed to glittering slits underthickly bushy brows.


“Ah,” said the settler's leader. “We'd be happy to show you. You and your men!” he announced,waving to the dozen warriors idling behind their leader. “Please. This way.” The settler's leader waved his men to come out of themud and then indicated to the war leader to follow.


The settlement's leader, called Alvin,because that happened to be his name, led his own men and thevisiting war leader and his men to wooden barn-like structure at theedge of the settlement and near a stand of poplars and birch. Theair around the building was rich with a yeasty-grainy scent as wellthe scents of sawed wood and pitch from a nearby building project. The inner walls of the structure were lined with barrels made ofvarious kinds of wood, mostly oak, some large, some smaller, arrangedfrom the floor to two galleries above. “The brewery!” Alvinannounced, clapping the shoulder of an elderly woman holding a copperladle, the action bowing the slightly built old woman and making anamber liquid in the ladle's bowl jump and droplets to spill on theplank floor. “Have a care, Alvin!” the old brewer hissed andshuffled two steps away from her leader, a handful of young femaleapprentices now peering out from behind barrels and around doorways. “You're making a mess, as usual. Not to mention firing mysciatica,” she finished, kneading her lower back with her freehand. The old woman's eyes squinted at the dimming light of thedoorway as it filled with the war leader and his men and theirglittering armament and armor. “Uhh. Guests of yours?” the oldwoman meekly inquired, hobbling a step behind her leader. “Indeed!”said Alvin, brightly. “May I present Axhandle, the king of theneighboring town of the same name.” Alvin waved a careless hand atthe others. “And his men.” Alvin maneuvered around the oldwoman, placed his hands on the the brewer's stooped, narrow and bonyshoulders. “Axhandle and men, please meet Variagote, the finestbrewer drawing air.” Three young men, mud spattered and now minustheir spears elbowed into the building and took positions behindbrewer and leader. “And Variagote's apprentices, of course, someof whom you met.” Variagote's pale blue eyes widened as herapprentices passed. “Here!” she spat, putting down the ladle andwaving gnarled hands at the young men. “Get out, go washyourselves and return at once! Enough of your skylarking andtracking mud when the sun shines and there's work to do! Go on!”and she shooed her male apprentices out the door, the bemusedwarriors parting to let them leave.


Alvin chuckled, his natural good humorin place. When the apprentices had gone he turned back to thebarrels. “Now, this ale,” Alvin said, slapping a large barrel onits side, causing Variagote to hiss in disapproval. “This ale issummer brewed. Made with dark malt, a fine rich drink. Variagote,if you would?” Variagote clicked her tongue, but, always secretlydelighted to show off her skills, gripped a bronze mug and drew off ahalf measure of the ale. She handed it to Alvin, who stepped forwardand handed it to Axhandle. Axhandle considered the mug, not missingthe metallurgy and skill of the mug's simple yet attractivemanufacture, and gulped the ale. “Good, isn't it?” Alvin smiledand asked. The king pursed his lips and wiped the foam from hisbeard. “Good enough,” he said, not wishing to grant the ale'squality. “Good enough?” muttered Variagote, her natural cautionof the war leader giving way to professional pride. “Right?”agreed Alvin, symbolically connecting the two assessments with armsstretched between king and brewer.


“But, another ale will interest youmore, I think,” Alvin said, taking the mug, drinking off the restof the dark ale and striding to a series of smaller barrels, causingone female apprentice to yelp and drift back into the shadows. “Calmyourself, Merivold, we have guests,” he chided the girl. Alvindrew off a half pint of the lighter-colored brew. “It's a paleale,” he said, “with a fine taste and a property you will findinteresting,” Alvin finished, stepping back to the king and handinghim the mug. “What property?” mused the king, swirling the aleand tipping back the mug for a taste. “It keeps and travels well,”Variagote said before Alvin could speak. Alvin nodded, gesturing forthe mistress brewer to continue. “Using a process and ingredients,which I won't bore you with,” Variagote intoned, certain hercurrent audience had more interest in the product and not its making,“that pale ale is formulated to keep its taste and freshness for along time, properly contained. Ideal for trade and transport.” Alvin nodded, smiling, and announced, “A valuable property and avaluable commodity, gentlemen. Imagine the possibilities of havingthis ale in every garrison, on every ship. A drink you can take withconfidence, not beholden to questionable local water sources while onthe move. All thanks to the particular bounty of this particularvalley.” Alvin heard the brewer's snort and quickly added, “Andto the particularly fine talents of Variagote and her apprentices, ofcourse,” he finished and gave the brewer a curt bow. Variagotesimply snorted again and turned away from the assembled men. Nolonger concerned and judging them useless, she resumed her work.


Axhandle passed the mug to hislieutenant, who also sampled. “We have beer,” Axhandle flatlystated. “Of course you do,” Alvin nodded. “Um. Tell me. What's your current production level in beers and ales?” Axhandledrew together his prodigious black eyebrows. He was in no mood totell this man that his town, much larger than this sparsely populatedvalley settlement, imported most of its beer, and that the beer didnot, as the brew mistress put it, travel well. He let his eyestravel the structure, the ranks of barrels. Enough to put asignificant dent in his town's beer shortfall. He turned hisbear-like head and regarded the workmen outside, framing anotherstructure, the mate of this current one, their wooden, bronze andiron (another metal carefully noted by the king) tools industriouslypounding and cutting and chiseling away. He also noted, with somesurprise, that the work force seemed made up half of women and thatchildren variously played and worked among the adults. “I'd liketo see the forges,” Axhandle stated. Alvin touched the side of hisnose with one finger and winked. “I expect you would,” he saidand stepped between the soldiers and back into brilliant sunshine ofthe late summer midday.


Axhandle and his men had come asemissary of a confederation of towns, calling themselves The Brave. For some time Alvin and his settlers had avoided notice. But, withtraders from Sunnyvale Park*, for that was the settlement's name,beginning to show up in neighboring towns to trade excellent beer,wine, timbers, animal skins, and small quantities of copper, bronzeand metal finished goods in exchange for pig iron and other selectcommodities and finished goods, the leaders of The Brave decided itwas time to formally visit Sunnyvale Park and take the people's andits leader's measure. The confederation, which its members called aguild, was always on the look out for strong partner towns. WhatAxhandle found, however, was a smallish settlement of residences atthe heart of near and dispersed industries that, while ordered,productive, and seemingly able to expertly exploit the resourcesavailable to them, possessed few martial skills and no apparent lustfor battle and conquest. His request to see their defensive andoffensive capabilities led to the farce at the muddy ground with abemused, but curious minority of the settlement's adult males.


“As you can see,” Alvin said,playing tour guide as he led the group through the settlement, “wehave begun the vineyards, grafting carefully transported cuttings ofour native cultivars onto this valley's robust wild root stock.” He waved an arm toward the neat rows of young vines marching acrossseveral acres of a gentle slope in the valley. In the distanceAxhandle could see other neat rows of the native wild variety ofgrapes, now orderly transplanted and colonizing other gentle slopes. Alvin paused their progress to introduce a vintner and hisapprentices and allow Axhandle and his men to sample the first winesproduced in the valley. “Naturally,” said the vintner, a shortportly middle-aged man with a sunburned bald spot on top of his head,ruddy round cheeks, and an apparently permanent toothy smile, “we'rerelying on the abundant wild grapes in the valley for our currentvintage. You'll find it rich, fruity, with a subtle grassiness and ahoney finish.” Axhandle gulped the offered wine and blinked at thevintner. He belched and shoved the mug back at the vintner, whosename was Sully. Sully staggered back a bit at the thrust and grippedthe mug. He waggled his eyebrows and his toothy smile neverfaltered. “Of course, it will take some years before the newgrafts truly produce, so we're playing with the wild grapes to see--” “The forges,” Axhandle interrupted, turning his face to Alvinand ignoring Sully. Alvin smiled and nodded, patted Sully on theshoulder and continued the tour.


Traversing a well-beaten earth paththrough the grassland, Alvin spotted an approaching lumbering figuredconcealed under several layers of skins piled high upon the bearer'sback and trailing over head, obscuring the bearer's face. “Oythere,” called Alvin. “Oy yerself!” grunted the bearer inreply, the voice muffled and strained with significant effort. Alvinstepped aside, as did Axhandle as the large bent figure, legs bowedabove big leather boots, plodded forward, drawing close. One ofAxhandle's men, one of the younger ones, nudged the mate at his side,crossed his arms and spread his thickly muscled legs, not ceding thepath. “Um,” began Alvin, but he had no time to say more beforethe massive figure weighted down with skins collided with the massivewarrior, causing both to stagger, both staying upright, neithermoving aside. “You wanna move aside, mate?” the weighted figureirritably asked, the tower of skins bobbing. The warrior offered alopsided smile and plucked a piece of straw, which he wiggled betweentwo teeth. “Maybe I do. Maybe I don't,” he lazily replied tothe chuckles of his mates. A huff of exasperation from under theskins. “Then mebbe you wanna carry this lot yerself!” and theskins rose and dropped onto the warrior, flattening him onto his backon the path, buried under skins.


An instant flurry of activity as thewarriors, apart from Axhandle who just rolled his eyes and sighedimpatiently, drew swords and converged around the now-unencumberedattacker. The “attacker” simply rolled her shoulders andstretched her broad back, the bun her long blonde hair had beengathered into, loosened by the skins toss, tumbled in wheat-coloredcurls down her thick neck and across muscular shoulders and a strongback. “Here now,” she said, regarding the warriors around her,her bright blue eyes twinkling. “You lot gonna hit a girl?” Shereached and backhanded one warrior on his midsection, causing him tostagger and choke to draw breath.


“I think--” began Alvin. “Forpity's sake!” exclaimed Axhandle, staring down at the big warrior,who was heaving the piled skins from his supine body. “Well, isn'tthis larks?” laughed the large young woman, whose name wasElvavarandoc, but everybody called her Elvie, or Big Elvie when theyfelt confident that doing so would not earn them a sound thumpingfrom the blonde amazon. Elvie reached down and grasped the forearmof the downed warrior, hauling him upright so that skins flew likehuge wind-tossed leaves. “Well now,” she sing-songed, slappingher palms together and walking around the warrior whose face had gonea brilliant red. “Where'd you find this, Alvin? He's a big 'un,”she pronounced and slapped the warrior's buttocks, causing him tojump and spin around to face the woman. “Feisty too!” shelaughed. “Aw now don't get yourself in a state, big fella” shesaid to the warrior, offering a placating palms down gesture. “I'mElvie,” she said, thrusting out one big rawboned hand. The warriorstared at the hand, looked to Axhandle, who simply shrugged, then atElvie's face. She leaned in. “This is where you show you gotmanners as well as yer muscle by shakin' my hand and statin' yername, darlin',” she said. The warrior sucked in a shaky breath,wondering how the world had gotten so mad so quickly. He made afunny sound in his throat, stuck out his gloved hand and croaked,“Warcry.” Elvie gripped the hand and pumped it vigorously. “Funny name, I like it,” she pronounced, broadly grinning. Shelet go of Warcry's hand and slapped his shoulder with force thatwould have toppled a smaller man. The big warrior simply rocked andregained his footing. “And,” she said to Warcry, “seeing asyou were the cause of this little set-to, I think it's only fair thatyou help me deliver these skins to Master Adelvan.” The big womanbent, lifted a batch of the tanned deerskins and heaved them over oneof Warcry's broad shoulders. Warcry turned his head to Axhandle, hisexpression both confused and appealing to his king as more skinspiled onto his shoulder.


“He was rather rude,” murmuredAlvin, confidentially leaning toward Axhandle. “It's only fairthat he now--”


“Help her deliver the skins!”Axhandle barked. Turning to Alvin, “I'd like no more surprises ordiversions, sir. The forges!”


Alvin nodded and smiled. He cheerfullywaved to Elvie who cheerfully waved back, then turned and continueddown the path. The king and his remaining men strode along behind, afew casting backward glances at their comrade. Elvie was deliveringa torrent of words, unmindful of whether Warcry listened or not, andpiled all but a small armful of skins onto the warrior's shouldersand back. At last, just as Elvie began leading the big warrior likea mule, the pair disappeared behind a dip in the path.


The dip ended in a stand of aspensalong one end of a pond bristling with cattails and other fresh watergrasses. Small cabins and open air sturdy wood structures dottedclearings among aspens and the group heard the forges and smithsbefore sighting them. Several clangs of metal on metal and the hissof water, which grew stronger as the party grew nearer. Axhandlespied a group of boys and girls dipping buckets into the pond andloading the filled buckets onto low wagons, pulled by two childreneach. Axhandle let his eyes roam the work area and noted thered-glowing pits in the ground and teams of men, some workingbellows, others engaged in smelting metals from ore. Other teams ofmen—and yes, also women, observed Axhandle—busied themselves withclay casts, sand casts, and other things that Axhandle had neitherseen nor understood to look at them.


“We are lucky that the surroundinghills contain an abundance of copper and some tin. It allows us toproduce enough bronze for construction, work and home items as wellas--” “Weapons and armor?” interrupted Axhandle, who could spynone of either among the items hung and glittering from posts andbeams. “Well,” averred Alvin. “Not as such. Knives,obviously. Is there a good market for weapons and armor aroundhere?” he asked, turning to Axhandle.


“A market,” Axhandle flatly stated. He gripped the smaller leader by his shoulder, stopping theirprogress, and shook him a little. “You,” he said, prodding aleather-covered index finger in Alvin's chest, “are both incrediblysmart and incredibly lucky. I haven't decided if you're alsoincredibly stupid, but the evidence is pointing that way.” Alvindraw back his head and wrinkled his brow. “Stupid?” Axhandlenodded, gravely. “You have turned this valley into one of the mostproductive spaces of its size that I've ever seen. And even a smallband of armed marauders could come in at any time and take whateverthey like.”


Alvin stared around the valley. Sounlike their former home. But, he and his people were adapting toit. They had used their considerable skills, knowledge and inherentwork ethic to find and use the resources available to them to do whatthey do best: create a home rich in food, comfortable lodgings, andcreature comforts, while producing quantities of raw materials andgoods to trade for things not within their valley. Iron had been anissue, the valley and its surrounding hills so far showing signs ofonly small deposits of iron-bearing ore. Still preoccupied withbuilding and establishing, they had had little time for production ofsome finished items and had traded for them, but they were rapidlymaking up for the shortfall in finished leather goods. Flax, grassesand lambs born in the spring were now providing them with fibers forspinning and weaving. With great effort they had turned suitableareas of the grassland and created gardens. They had fenced areasfor pastures. Their first spring and summer had been busy andpeaceful. Groups of Sunnyvale Park traders had set out for scoutednearby towns, bearing trade goods, and had met no dangers. None hadcome to the valley until Axhandle's party appeared.


Alvin recalled the ships that had cometo their former island home, bearing armed warriors who did not careabout the tidy town with its orderly homes, forges, factories anddockyard piled with trade goods awaiting shipment to other shores. They had smashed and burned, loading whatever they could onto theirships. Some had died by the fighter's hands. Most had fled to thehills, waiting to see what the soldiers would do next. After threedays of drinking and further destruction, they left, sailing back tothe north. The wider world had come to the peaceful, industriouspeople, and they were not ready for it. Though they had sailed fromtheir homeland into that wider world, they were still not ready forit. Alvin nodded, understanding the wisdom of Axhandle's words.


“What do we do?” he asked thebigger man.


“Finally,” muttered Axhandle. “You've said something sensible.


Axhandle continued his tour of thetown, further noting the people's cleverness and seeminginexhaustible resourcefulness and effort and, to the warrior's mind,bloody-minded tendency toward cheerfulness. Nobody seemed unhappy,and everybody, including the children, had some role attached to aduty. He noted no rancor, one for another, among the people, andrivalries appeared good-natured and about winning for the joy of it,not for elevation in social standing. Your average Sunnyvaler seemedcontent to let his or her labor and products of those labors speakfor themselves and confer worth upon the laborer.


The trades seemed loosely aligned toone family or family grouping, but there existed considerableopenness for a child with, say, a particular talent or desire tocultivate crops, orchards or vines to leave his family's business inmetal working and enter into the home, say, of a family of farmers orvintners to work and learn, keeping in close contact with his or herblood family, but often pair-bonding within his or her work-adoptivefamily.


The most shocking part for the warriorking was that apart from actual child-bearing and breast-feedingthere appeared to be few distinctions made for gender. Property,what little nod these people gave to the concept, was as likely topass from mother to daughters or sons, not just father to just sons. Girls joined their brothers in education and the ability to read andwrite was judged a universal necessity, not something to be studiedonly by a male elite serving the leader.


The people used a script composed ofcharacters that, strung together, formed words, something the peoplehad picked up over the long generations of contact with other peopleand the practical advantage of a written language for tallies, tradesand record keeping. They had yet to sort out how to producequantities of local paper, lacking their former access to both paperand the materials they traditionally used for domestic paperproduction, but they were on the way toward solving it, and haddiscovered paper among the neighboring towns. Meanwhile, talliescould be done in the dirt, and records, what few were truly necessaryat the moment, could be inscribed on clay and fired; old fashioned,but effective, and kind of fun.


Of tremendous importance to them: thesmall bound collections of written stories, legends and poems, whichhad traveled with them to the valley, now kept safe from the elementsand chance destruction within a huge oak chest in Alvin's modesthome. The chest, which could be fitted with a cleverly constructedtop of joined and finished boards, became a table. Benches producedand placed around it created a dining and meeting spot for Alvin andother leaders in Sunnyvale Park. It was at this makeshift table thatAxhandle, Alvin, and a few of Axhandle's men and a few of Alvin'speople now gathered. A fire burned in the stone kitchen fireplace. Breads, meat, roasted vegetables and pitchers of wine and beercovered the surface of the table and all helped themselves.


Alvin's wife, Bagrond, patted thetow-heads of the youngest of their brood of children, now fed, andushered them outside and from under foot, picking up the youngest, alittle girl, from Alvin's lap. Bagrond, though she'd borne manychildren and her tanned face showed the lines of age and weather, wasa handsome women, sharing the characteristic good health and vigor ofher people. The husband and wife seemed loving and devoted to eachother. Bagrond smiled and pressed herself into the doorway asElvie's massive frame pushed into it. “Oops!” bellowed the bigwoman, who seemed to have no indoor voice. “Sorry, Missus! Almostcrushed yer little 'un!” Bagrond left the home with her undamagedand giggling daughter as Elvie entered it. The big woman let hereyes adjust, nodding to Alvin who smiled and waved. Elvie's smilebrightened to see Warcry among the group. Warcry ducked his head,began to rise, then changed his mind and sat again, suddenly unableto decide what to do with his hands, which flopped on the table,fingers drumming. Axhandle considered the blush on the big warrior'scheeks as Elvie slung a leg over the bench and bumped Warcry with oneample hip, causing her equally ample breasts to jump and sway under alightweight undyed summer shirt. “Budge up!” she announced andsat, making the bench groan. It did not occur to anyone to ask whyElvie had shown up or who had invited her.


“As to the matter of defense,” saidAxhandle, announcing the end of informality and bringing people backto business, “I propose to leave one of my men behind to work withyou and your people in learning the rudiments of defensivestructures, weaponcraft, and--”


“I'll do it!” blurted Warcry, and,having interrupted his king, his cheeks burned anew. Axhandle didnot allow the smile that wished to appear because of his lieutenant'sill-contained eagerness and its apparent cause.


Elvie's smile never faltered and sheremained uncharacteristically quiet. Warcry's large frameinvoluntarily jolted and flexed, inviting questioning looks from somearound the table. Elvie's hands were not visible, but her left hand,the one farthest from Warcry, appeared above the table and grabbed aleftover chop. Her right hand remained out of sight as Elvie tore abite with a her teeth and chewed.


“Well,” said Alvin, deciding thelieutenant was not suffering a seizure, his voice resuming itsbrightness as he turned to face Axhandle. “If you have noobjection, I guess that's settled. Warcry will stay with us andteach us.” Axhandle dragged his gaze away from his bothered younglieutenant and nodded to Sunnyvale Park's leader. “So it wouldseem.” He turned back to his warrior. “I trust you'll keep yourmind on your mission, Warcry,” he added. “Yessir!” came therapid reply, but Warcry kept his gaze firmly fixed on the wallopposite him, his spine rod-straight and fingers entwined on thetable's surface.


Axhandle sighed and filled his mug. The beer was excellent, he admitted to himself. “The rest of uswill leave at dawn. I'd like samples of the beers, wines andanything else you have for trade. Don't feel abused, we'll make upthe difference over time.”


Alvin nodded and saluted the king withhis mug. “Not at all! We'd be happy to supply you with what youask. It's to our benefit that all know of and desire our goods.”


Axhandle sighed again. “Not all. Heed me. For now, keep your heads down. Warcry,” here the kingnodded toward, but refused to face his distracted and now slightlysweating warrior, “will begin to get you into some defensive shape. Until then, and until I return, you are to limit your contact withother people. Do you understand?” Alvin nodded, as attentive as awell behaved student. “We understand, don't we?” He looked tothe faces of his people around the table, and each nodded agreement. “Good,” said Axhandle and put down his mug. “Now we will allget some sleep.” And the gathering broke up, the Axehandlersbecoming more familiar with the standard and lengthy pleasantries andsmall talk that accompanied any breaking up of Sunnyvalers. By nowmany of the Sunnyvalers knew the names of each Axehandler's parents,grandparents, any significant other, children and preferencesregarding ales and the best times to harvest autumn wheat and barley,the last something which none of the present Axhandlers had anyinformed or interested opinion upon.


Bagrond returned. Seeing the meetingbreaking up she approached one of Axehandler's warriors and pressed asmall piece of homemade paper into his hand. “Bloodruin, for yourwife,” she said, smiling up at the warrior. “It's the recipe formy mutton pie, which you so enjoyed.” She carefully pointed outand explained the characters for numbers and the simple drawings ofingredients until she was confident that the warrior understood themand could relate them to his wife. “Please tell Fire-Eater to usefresh thyme, when available, and to trim the mutton, but not tooclosely,” she said and rubbed her knuckles on the big man's belly. “A little fat never killed a man,” she chuckled. The warrior,who had killed many enemies in his time and earned his reputation forcold courage and occasional brutality, gingerly bent and chastelykissed Bagrond's forehead, thanking her sincerely, carefully storingthe recipe in a pocket inside his coat.


Alvin and Bagrond stood togetheroutside their door, children noisily careening back and forth and inand out of the doorway, and waved good night to the retreatingAxehandler's and Sunnyvalers. “Nice people,” Alvin stated andhugged his wife close. “Mmhm,” she agreed. “Though they couldbathe more,” she finished, waving a hand before her face. Turningout of her husband's embrace she pushed the door wide open andentered to begin tidying up. Alvin smiled at his wife's back, thenturned and continued to watch the retreating figures. He noted thatall the Sunnyvalers had turned aside to the paths to their dwellings,leaving only Elvie. Elvie and Warcry had tarried until both were atthe back of the column of Axehandlers. He watched as Elvie stoppedand tugged Warcry to the side. The warrior hesitated, lookedfurtively around, and then chased after Elvie in the direction of thebarns and lofts. “Good for her,” Alvin muttered. “And,hopefully, she doesn't damage Warcry any more than the lad seeks tobe damaged,” he observed. As the last bit of the sun disappearedbehind the western hills, Alvin turned to assist his wife in tidyingup and getting the children ready for bed.


The Axehandlers left at dawn the nextmorning, mounted on palfreys, some of the war horses enlisted to pullthree wagons loaded with Sunnyvale Park goods. Most of the townturned out to see them off. Warcry watched his townsmen's departure,feeling suddenly a little lost, a little out of place. He had neverbeen outside the company of his people. Alvin moved forward to standbeside him. “They'll be back,” he casually commented. Warcrynodded. “In the meantime,” Alvin turned and faced his people. “You have an eager audience and the resources of the valley at yourdisposal.” Warcry, reminded of his purpose, raised his chin andturned. He also scanned the faces of the Sunnyvalers. “Right,”he announced. “Let's get to work.”


The days passed, piling up into weeks. Leaves changed color and fell as the days grow shorter, the nightscooler. Sunnyvale Park still hummed with all of its usualactivities. Now, though, teams of men and women, according to tradeand augmented by able-bodied workers, had been formed to beginconstruction of defensive fortifications. Trees were felled anddressed. Trenches dug. A tall palisade ringed by a dry moat slowlyformed around the town proper. At the approaches to the valley tallwooden watch towers rose with great bronze cauldrons installed,filled with pitch and kindling to be lit by torches as a warning ofthe approach of any outsiders. Everybody oohed and ahhed andapplauded at the twilight testing of the watchtower fires.


The miners, dye makers and barbersconspired to produce powders and crystals of ores, metals and saltsthat would give the fires different colors. Warcry was shocked bythe small demonstration of brilliant red, orange, purple, green,yellow and even blue fires. It was suggested to him thatpreparations could be used to symbolically indicate types ofapproaching dangers. Warcry had never heard of this innovation andhe sighed to find that, once again, his simple plan had been easilyand industriously innovated upon by the keen-minded Sunnyvalers. Asecond, longer test of the watch fire color system was staged duringa massive town picnic in the central field which afforded the bestview of all the towers. The oohs and ahhs and applause this timewere much louder as a light show of various colors flared into thegathering night. A group of young men and women created a rhymingsong, with exclamations of each color and its particular meaning,which was quickly learned, the song picked up by all. TheSunnyvalers and Warcry sang and drank and laughed, crying out themeaning of the particular fire as soon as the color appeared.**


Warcry did his best to introduceregimentation into the random and seemingly chaotic daily routines ofthe Sunnyvalers. He instituted a system of Calling the Hours, acustom in Axehandle to remind people of the passage of time, the endof some activities and the start of others. The Sunnyvalers, thoughthey grasped the concept, had little need of being reminded of thetime, each acting in accordance with the needs of trade or craft andthe passage of the sun the only necessary reminder of time's passage. Still, at Warcry's insistence, teams of older children learned theshort sequences of horn calls that sounded the Hours, six in total,through the day. The horn, a piece of long and highly polishedbronze, had been installed at the top of a central tower within thepalisade. In the event of attack, the central tower, along with sixshorter towers spaced throughout the community, had archer stationsprotected by thick oak shielding. The palisade had ladders that ledto interior walkways where Sunnyvalers could fire bows, hurl spears,or drop things upon would-be attackers.


Warcry found that what the Sunnyvalerslacked in martial discipline they made up for in creativity andproblem solving. His simple idea for the palisade, once its purposewas explained to them, was quickly improved upon by Sunnyvalerwoodspeople, engineers and craftworkers. Warcry found that simplyordering something only sometimes met with success. He learned toexplain concepts, reasons, purposes, and was then satisfied withresults that often exceeded his expectations and usually his timelines.


The Sunnyvalers picked up weaponcrafting fairly quickly. Soon, the blacksmiths were turning outswords and spear and arrow points as often as mugs and hinges andnails. Creating an army and teaching that army how to fight? Another matter, and Warcry found the daily drills and sparring afrustrating chore. No matter what he did, he could not instill inthese clever, industrious and otherwise intelligent men a martialspirit and military discipline.


As the pleasant early autumn daysprogressed it became common knowledge and accepted that Warcry hadbecome Elvie's man. At first Warcry had tried to keep their liaisonsa secret, but Elvie seemed to have no pause or even a hint of shameabout emerging from their nightly partnering as blithely as anybride. It slowly dawned on Warcry that the only person who seemed tocare was him. The Sunnyvalers now routinely asked after Elvie ofhim, and about Warcry of Elvie. Within a couple of weeks Warcrydropped pretense, as shown when he walked with Elvie to an early fallfeast, reaching out to hold her hand in his. The huge pair arrivedas a couple to the nods and greetings of all.


In the end, it was Elvie who providedWarcry's needed military breakthrough. During the day, Elvie usuallydisappeared to work with the tanners. Her family, all huge or atleast very large people, worked as miners or at the forges andsmiths. But, Elvie had no talent or patience for that. She hadbounced from trade to trade, never quite finding her niche andparticular talent, but always a welcome source of muscle power andher own brand of loud good cheer.


By his third week with the Sunnyvalers,Elvie had taken to accompanying Warcry on his rounds and duties. “Won't you be missed?” he asked her. “I mean, at the tannery.” Elvie considered the question, bent her head and spit. Wiping herchin she said, “Naw. If they need me, they know how to find me.” Warcry accepted the answer and her company, and little by littleElvie insinuated herself into Warcry's military master plan forSunnyvale.


Elvie sat her plump rear end on ahillside and watched Warcry leading yet another, in the end,ill-coordinated defensive maneuver by her people's biggest andstrongest males. She tsked and rose, brushing grass from her skirt. She marched away, returning before long with some of the biggest andstrongest women among the Sunnyvalers, including three of hersisters, two aunts, and four cousins. “Not like that, ya bunch ofconfused hens,” she bellowed at the men. She and the other womenstrode into the midst of the men. Elvie tickled Warcry under hischin and snatched his Sunnyvale-made spear, a proper one this timewith an iron tip. She extended her arm, circling, making the menjump back. “Treat it like a game!” she barked. “Us women arethe defenders. You lot are the attackers.” The women snatched upswords and spears and shields from the wooden racks and joined Elviewho arranged them in Warcry's phalanx formation. A tiny andtherefore ineffectual phalanx, but Warcry raised his eyebrows at howquickly the women seemed to grasp the concept of the defensiveformation. “We're the turtle!” Elvie bellowed. “You all arethe foxes! Come and get us!” The men at first were hesitant. But, the women's catcalls and name-calling got the better of them anda few of the men nudged each other rushed the turtle with swordsbefore them. And just as quickly rushed back at the blood-curdlingcries and thrusting spears of the women at the leading edge of theturtle.


After that, there was no keeping someof the women out of the military training. To Warcry's surprise andsome chagrin, he counted his best students and quickest learnersamong the women. But, with the addition of the women, the men seemedto catch on much faster. Together, and with Warcry's and Elvie'sshared leadership and instruction, the now-larger number of rotatingdefender students learned discipline, technique, coordination, andgreater familiarity and skill with weapons.

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The Story of Sunnyvale Park

Part II of II

As yet, the Sunnyvalers had picked uponly the rudiments of bow-making, a weapon they were used forhunting. But each series of bows for military use built on theknowledge of the previous production, growing longer, testingdifferent woods. They remained simple bows, though, and Warcrywished he had an Axehandler bowyer with him to teach the crafters theart of the recurve bow. To his surprise, one of the craftersapproached him one day holding a recurve bow. “Begging yourpardon, Master Warcry,” said the crafter, a young man named Olvin,one of Alvin's older sons. “If you'll notice,” he continued,holding up the bow, “Instead of making simple curved lengths in ourbows, if we join this particular wood lending strength to thisparticular wood lending flexibility, soak and carefully form thecombined wood so that the distal ends produce these countervailingcurves, we can significantly increase the velocity and range of themissiles.” Warcry took the bow and ran his hands along the lengthof the wood, tracing his fingertips along a recurve end. Shorterthan a standard Axehandler bow, but still, Olvin and his mates hadthought about it and realized the bow could made more deadly by theseinnovations in its design.


Olvin toed the bare earth and clearedhis throat. “It you deem it a waste of time, we will, of course--” “No!” Warcry cried and gripped the youth by the shoulder and ledhim to the palisade. Together they climbed and Warcry took an arrowfrom the quiver of one of the defenders on watch. He notched thearrow, drew the bow, and let the arrow fly into the empty fieldbeyond the palisade, its range and speed greatly increased over thestandard bows. “We should keep making them?” Olvin tentativelyasked. “You most certainly will,” Warcry said and smiled. “Andwith your permission I'll keep this one and it will be called Olvin'sGreeting.” The young man's smile was radiant, his joy guileless. Warcry laughed and shook his head, wondering if he'd ever get used tothese people who delighted in solving a puzzle, but who had littlesense of the puzzle's purpose and meaning.


At that exact moment, Sunnyvale'sdefenders would either begin to understand the purpose and meaning,or they would utterly fail. A distant horn sounded on the middayautumn air, soon followed by the flare of the warning fire atop thenorth tower—red. The signal for an armed and unknown approach intothe valley. Warcry gripped the pointed top of one palisade log andgazed into the far distance. If the watchers were doing as they weretold even now they were hastily retreating to the palisade. The hornin the central tower picked up the alarm and sounded. It soundedagain. The more distant towers heard the sound and other hornssounding, broadcasting the warning and call to action to anybody whomight not have seen the fire. Moving quickly, Warcry began barkingorders at the assembling crowd behind the palisade. Sunnyvalers fromthe outlying areas would rush to get behind the palisade or else, iftoo distant, like those in watch towers and at the distant forges,move to designated and defensible hiding places outside the town.

Warcry heard Elvie's grunts andwatched her big blonde head appear through the opening onto thepalisade's upper walkway. She righted herself, laden with Warcry'sarmor and helmet. She dropped the armor at his feet, grabbed Warcryroughly around the waist, pulled him into her ample bosom and kissedhim hard. She drew back, her cheeks flushed, her eyes alight. “Let's do this, darlin'!” she bellowed and helped him into andsecured his armor. Her man suitably attired, Elvie took up aposition along the walkway, shrugging a bow off her shoulder, a spearstrapped to her back.


As Elvie tugged and tightened hisarmor, Warcry pulled on his gloves and rubbed his kiss-numbed lips,oblivious to the grin across his whiskered face, one eye on the northroad. When she left him to take her post, Warcry turned and gazedagain out at the gently rolling fields. He saw no more Sunnyvalersretreating behind the palisade. He called down and demanded silencefrom the chattering Sunnyvalers. “Form into your units!” hecalled down. “Take roll in your group, account for you people!” Waves from some of the group captains and disjointed calls of, “Yes,sir!” Warcry nodded. “Gate Team, secure the gate!” He knewthat some were pulling in the planked walkway that allowed easytraverse of the dry moat. He heard and felt the great oak gatesclose and the grunts of Sunnyvalers heaving the heavy oak bar intoplace. Warcry heard the criers repeating his orders throughout thetown, spurring each team into action, the other two gates beingquickly similarly secured.


Warcry's eyes searched the north road. He saw the enemy. A handful on horseback, most on foot. Perhapsfifty men total, the horses cantering, the men on foot moving fast,the glint of sunlight off metal weapons. No marks yet to indicatetown or faction. Brigands, he guessed. Good.


“Bowmen!” he called, raising anarm. “And women!” came back a distant woman's response. Warcrygritted his teeth and muttered a curse. “Bowpeople!” he cried,“Notch your arrows and stand ready. Do not fire until my order!”


Below him and in the open area behindthe palisade men and women gathered in pocket formations, swordssheathed, spears at the ready, lest any attacker make it through thepalisade wall. Another team filled fire buckets with water, carriedand hoisted the buckets by rope up the palisade walkway, positioningothers in designated places throughout the town. Some securedbuildings, drawing shutters and bolting doors, while still othersgathered the children out of the open, into interior structures. Warcry spared glances back and was pleased that the Sunnyvalersseemed to be acting in accordance with his teaching. But, gone weretheir usual smiles. Suddenly, this was not play. It was no longer agame. All but the babies of Sunnyvale Park had memories of theattack that drove them from their island home. Good, thought Warcry. Maybe that will fire them to not allow another occurrence of thesame.


The brigands drew up and stopped some100 yards from the palisade wall. They gazed up the wall. Warcryfelt his heart beat under his breastplate. Otherwise, the day wassuddenly quiet, thick with potential energy. Potential mayhem. Potential bloodshed and death. Warcry waited a moment, and then hisresonant bass voice boomed down from the palisade. “You aretrespassers! Drop your weapons or be fired upon!”


The brigands gave no sign that theyheard. They remained still, silent, staring up at the palisade wall. Then, one of the horsemen lifted his arms, palms out. Movingcarefully and slowly, he removed the iron helmet that covered hishead and obscured his face. “Would you fire on your own king,Warcry?!” Axhandle called up to his young lieutenant.


Warcry stared hard at the man. When herealized the ruse he spun and bellowed, “Lower your bows! Do notfire! Lower your bows, these are not our enemies!” He turned backand saw rising dust in the distance. Several riders. Pennants ofseveral colors raised on poles. As they drew closer Warcry saw thecolors and emblems of his own town, of LoSt and Oslo, Colorado andCambria, and others. All confederate pennants, all members of TheBrave.


Warcry raise his sword, threw his headback and whooped into the oblivious blue sky. He sheathed his swordand leaned over the palisade wall. “You play a dangerous game, myking,” called Warcry to the advancing Axhandle. Axhandle raised ahand, his helm slung under one arm. “Can you think of a better wayto learn if you've taught any dangerous games?” the king calledback.


Warcry called down to the Sunnyvalers,“Open the gate! Restore the walkway!” The Sunnyvalershesitated, blinking up at Warcry, adrenalin still charging thepeople's systems, expecting something—but not this. Warcryscurried down a ladder. “Come on, lift this bar!” he called,surprised to realize he was laughing. Perhaps he'd absorbed some ofthe good humor of these people. If so, he would have to watchhimself. Axhandle did not expect his lieutenants to laugh in thecourse of their duties. He joined others in lifting the heavy oakbar out of its heavy iron brackets, grunting with combined effort toplace it aside. The gate door pushed open, the walkway swung out tobridge the moat.


Warcry pointed out some men and women,names he now knew, personalities and memories he could recall. Heinstructed some to run out and tell those throughout the town and theoutliers beyond the palisade the news that there is no danger, tostand down and come at their ease. Heads nodded and the chosen racedto give the good news.


Alvin, who had been among the interiordefenders, had raced back to give the news to the children and theirminders: there is no danger, come out. Now he returned to the gatesurrounded by curious children who quickly outpaced him, racing outthe gate to watch the spectacle of the advancing colorful parade. Bagrond joined him, the couple's youngest daughter perched on herhip. The pair held hands and watched Axhandle and hisscruffily-disguised retinue enter the town through the gate.


Elvie strode to Warcry. The Axhandlerwarrior slid his brawny arm around her waist. The pair gazed at eachother. “Disappointed?” Warcry asked. Elvie bobbed her head. “Alittle bit!” she matter-of-factly replied. “Was all primed for athrow-to.” Warcry kissed her nose. “That's my warriorprincess.”


Alvin and Bagrond drew up alongsideWarcry and Elvie. Variagote hobbled up to her leader's elbow, usinga spear for a cane. She'd sensibly stayed within the closed andlocked brewery until the all clear. She gazed up at Alvin, her eyesnarrowed and lips drawn. “Not a speck of work getting done,” sherasped. Alvin turned his head, wrapped his free arm aroundVariagote's thin shoulder. “No,” he agreed. “But, it allseems rather fun, doesn't it?” Variagote only snorted.


Later in the day, as the sun sanklower, casting a golden light across the undulating grassland andthrough the stands of trees, cook fire smoke rose and the scents ofroasting meats and fresh breads permeated the settlement. Seldomneeding much excuse for a public feast, Sunnvale Park had pulled outall the stops for their guests.


A group of boys and girls raced up thecentral tower staircase and the winner of the race sounded thesundown horn blast. Several visiting leaders or select dignitariesfrom several of The Brave towns raised their heads at the horn'ssounding, mouths chewing or engaged in conversation, or both.


Kahalan, queen of her own town andrecognized leader of The Brave, sat at a long table with Alvin andseveral others. Between rounds of food, people's plates getting nochance to empty, she listened to and spoke with Alvin about farming,metallurgy, forestry, systems of production, storage, transport andfair trade standards. The two quickly found that they shared similarinterests and ideas, instantly warming them to other.


Kahalan said, “Yes, but we don'tbegin to introduce some basic minimum standards in iron trade, thenwe risk weakening of the overall economy due to--” here she watcheda fresh plate of desserts, featuring several honey-sticky fruits andpastries lowered in front of her by a server. “Oh my goodness,”she groaned. “I'll need bigger clothes by tomorrow.” She nibblea small fruit pie and then turned waved to Elsie, catching the bigwoman's eye. “Speaking of larger clothing, dear, how far along areyou?” she called across the table.


Instantly, all conversation died andall eyes turned to Elsie. She sighed and put down the turkey leg shehad been chewing. She turned and faced Warcry. The massive warriorstared at Elsie, his face reddening and his mouth hanging open. “Whuuu?” he croaked.


Elsie slung an arm around his shoulder. “Listen, darlin'. I'm sure I don't gotta explain this to you. But, just in case? OK. See here. When a man and a woman love eachother, sometimes--”


“Are you pregnant?!” Warcry cried. Elsie pursed her lips and nodded. “Her Highness over there,” shegestured with her turkey leg in Kahalan's direction, “noticed it. Royalty and my missing monthly guest? Seems I might could be knockedup.”


Kahalan's hand flew to her mouth. “Oh! My goodness, I'm so sorry!” She was deeply grieved to so casuallyblunder into so personal a matter. Elvie just shrugged and took afresh bite of her turkey leg.


Warcry made a keening sound and heclosed and opens his hands on the table. His head shot around andfound his king's eyes. “My king!” he yelled. “My king, I begyour leave! I wish to marry! Do I have your leave to propose?”


Axhandle, who had had sampled severalbeers by this time, belched and laughed. “Gonna close that barndoor after the horses have run out, lad?” He laughed for more thanthe joke was worth. “Won't be the first time that's happened!” He laughed louder and a page pushed against his back to keep the kingfrom falling backward.


Elsie reflectively chewed. “Marry?”


Kahalan lowered her hand and said toElsie, “If he's the father, dear, you two should marry. It'sproper.”


Elsie looked owlishly at the queen. “Proper?”


Alvin smiled and nodded. He raised ahand and waved to Elsie. “It's a custom. A formal pronouncementof pair-bonding before one's family and neighbors. Often anexecutive of the society speaks. Makes it formal.”


Warcry burst upright and the tablejumped, causing several of those seated to cry out and right topplingmugs. Elsie watched in alarm as the big man straightened his tunic,pushed back his unkempt mane of dark hair and smoothed his dark bushybear. Warcry lowered himself on one knee and took Elsie's hand,removing the turkey leg with his free hand. “Elsie? My love? Will you do me the honor of--”


“What the heck you doing, Warcry?”Elsie interrupted, yanking back her hand and looking intently intoWarcry's eyes. “You gone funny or something?”


Alvin grinned and winked at nobody inparticular. “He's 'proposing.'” He said the word as one mightpronounce a foreign word to those who do not know the language. “I've seen this before. In the Crowlands. Except there they do itwith the woman on top of a ladder and the man holding two smallpigs.”


Warcry rose. His jaw clenched. “Doyou refuse me?!”


Elsie scoffed. “Refuse you what?! What the heck, Warcry?”


There followed a spirited exchange ofideas, interrogatory and exclamations. The people of Sunnyvale Parkpossessed no defined notion of marriage as something that happenswith the involvement of the state. Two people choose each other andpair bond, simple as that. Sure, sometimes the family would have aparty. Usually, the friends and neighbors and business-mates of thecouple would plan a feast when something important resulted from thepair bond: the first sign of a child in a woman's swelling belly;the opening of a business as a couple, the building of a house forthe couple, which invited contributions of the materials and labor ofothers . . . Until something important happened as a result of twopeople merely having sex together, to the Sunnyvalers, they hadsimply decided to boink and say goofy things to each other, and goodfor them. But, there was no reason for the state to get involved inany of it.


Alvin, ever the peace keeper, turned toWarcry and Elsie, rose from the bench and tapped his mug on thetable. When he had silence, he began. “Warcry,” he said,extending his hand, palm raised, to the warrior. “Do you loveElsie and plan to help her raise this child and any children your sextogether may produce?” Warcry's mouth fell open and he blushed tohis eyeballs. But, he gathered himself and responded, “Of courseI do!” Alvin smiled and nodded, anticipating the answer. Heturned himself and his outstretched hand to Elsie. “Dear Elsie! Do you love this huge Axhandler and plan to help him raise this childand any children your sex together may produce?” Elsie laughed,reached out a big arm and slapped Warcry's buttocks. “I'd like tosee him try to get away! Yes and yes!”


Alvin raised his mug and invited allassembled to do the same. “I, Alvin, leader of Sunnyvale Park,having heard the intentions of our Master Warcry and our MistressElsie, declare them pair-bonded! May you have several huge childrentogether!” Alvin cried a “Huzzah” which was picked up andrepeated by several others. He sat and nodded to Kahalan andAxhandle. “Now they're married,” he stated, feeling confidentthat he had settled the matter. “But, I can get some small pigs ifyou think that's important.”


Warcry warmly hugged his new wife andrested a hand on her ample belly. Elsie chuckled and fed him her newhusband from her turkey leg.


Just as he was about to resume samplingthe desserts, Alvin burst upright again. “Oh! I forgot. Mugs up,mugs up!” When all mugs were raised with several attendants busilytrying to refill those mugs that had been happily emptied by themarriage announcement, Alvin said, “I also pronounce Warcry andElsie the generals of the Sunnyvale Park Defense Force.” Morehuzzahs from the Sunnyvalers and a whoop and “Dang right!” fromElsie.


“What?!” boomed Axhandle, whoseidea of military bearing did not include actual breasts under hisgeneral's breastplates.


“How charming!” gushed Kahalan, whowas no stranger to riding out to meet an enemy with sword raised.


And that is how the night went. Sunnyvale Parkers and their neighbors talking and arguing andlaughing into the wee hours of the morning. Many deals were struck. Some of the visitors opted to stay on and continue to learn aboutSunnyvale Park's many production innovations. Some young Sunnyvalersof various trades and crafts opted to accept invitations and travelbeyond the valley and learn about the other towns, their industriesand how Sunnyvale Park might better integrate into the trade of thecontinent.


Three days after the marriage of Warcryand Elsie, the visiting royalty and dignitaries mounted their horsesat the head of a long train of wagons loaded with goods. Kahalan,whose horse stood stamping at the head of procession, walkedarm-in-arm between Alvin and Bagrand.


“I'm so pleased you chose to join TheBrave,” said Kahalan.


“I'm sure it will createopportunities for us all,” Alvin agreeably replied, turning to seethe guild flag flying above the gate of the palisade. “Also, we'llget to work on creating a Sunnyvale Park flag,” he hurriedly said,remembering the maniacal importance the visiting dignitaries seemedto give to a piece of communal cloth. Kahalan laughed, understandingnow that Sunnyvalers had their ways of seeing things, their own waysof doing things. Looking around a last time, she granted that,though extremely odd in many ways, the people of this valley had away of making all things work. “I'm sure you'll do us all proud,Alvin.” She mounted her horse. Cantering ahead, the royal escortsignaled and called for the advance. Slowly and inexorably, TheBrave visitors made their way out of the valley.


Alvin and Bagrand kissed. Bagrandslipped her arm through her husband's and they ambled together backto the wide open gate.


At the top of the palisade two guardsleaned against the logs and gazed up at the flag of the guild. “Notbad,” said one, a weaver by trade. “But, I'd use the silk we'vebegun to produce instead of that wool.” His companion, ametal-worker by trade nodded. “That yellow and that white,” hesaid, gesturing with his spear. “I'm thinking gold thread from thegold deposits found last week, and silver.” Both nodded, alreadymentally figuring out how to improve the piece of cloth and itsdesign.


Ever-improving on their lives with theresources at their disposal, the settlement of Sunnyvale Park grew,prospered, and acquitted itself very well as a important member ofthe guild, and a useful and just neighbor of all in the society ofKorch who did not actively oppose the guild. The Sunnyvalerscontinued to learn how to defend their valley, eventually beingtested by those who tried to invade and take what they had notlabored to create. They did very well at defending their home. Though, they learned a new lesson in mourning those who fall todefend the peace and way of life they loved above all things.

And, yes. General Warcry, who hadbeen giving his blessing by his king to stay indefinitely inSunnyvale Park, and General Elsie did indeed have several hugechildren together.


*When they arrived in the valley, wornout and running low on supplies, the exhausted survivors had pitchedtents and endured eight straight days of mid-summer rain. Exploration of the valley revealed abundant natural resources: richsoil, edible grasses, fresh water, wild grapes, forests of mixedwoods, large game including both land and waterfowl, and thepossibility of some essential ores. Hunkered down in their soggyfirst encampment, Alvin proposed a naming contest for theirsettlement, the winner to receive the last of the wine, carried offfrom the ruins of their former home. Several names were floated,including Boggy Downs, Soggy Knickers, Muddy Toes, and You Have To BeKidding Me. Finally, a boy of five years piped in, “SunnyvalePark,” which made everybody laugh, lifting everybody's spirits. The boy was declared the winner, the settlement became SunnyvalePark, the boy's family received the last of the wine, and, as if inagreement and affirmation, the next day the sun appeared and usheredin a string of warm dry days, further lifting everybody's spirits.


** Coincidentally, on the very eveningof the twilight picnic and watch tower fire show, an outlaw band ofover a hundred mean, desperate and armed men were making the easternapproach to the valley and had gathered in a cleft between the hills,intent upon a nighttime raid on whatever people called the valleyhome. The forward edge of the massed men exclaimed and fell backupon seeing a green flame spurt up, distant and small, yet brillianton the far end of the valley. More men pushed forward demanding toknow what was the matter. From the valley came the ghostly sounds ofa distant, monstrous roar, which was the singing Sunnyvalers, thesound of their combined voices, echoing, and echoing again, morphinginto a dirge-like moaning wail in the cleft between the hills. Atthat moment, a column of scarlet fire hissed and speared several feetinto the air not 50 yards from their position, from the utmost peakof the nearest hill. Against the darkening sky a slender, darkerfigured loomed upward, its top spouting the fire. “Dragons!” oneman cried. The call spread as quick as fire among the brigands whomade a disorganized and perilous retreat out of the hills surroundingthe valley. They never returned to the valley of Sunnyvale Park,accounting it until each brigand's dying day a place of great evil.

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"Ha'u, visitors and welcome to my Tribal Village! :smile:
I am most grateful to see you all have arrived here safe and well.
As you enter our ever exceeding territory
, we demand that you uphold our Tribes rules with honor and respect, for we are compelled to impart our own high standards of honor and respect to you. As our Tribeswomen Royal guests, the most profound and interesting fact that you'll immediately realize, is that our Tribal Village shelters only women. As for the whereabouts of our Tribal Villagers Offsprings Paternities, they're three Special Male Servant Rulers that our Tribal Village has what we call a Blood-Tie Treaty with, in which mentions a special arranged agreement for when any of our mature Tribeswomen are willing and prepared to procreate. It also mentions our agreement for regular Royal horse caravan visits to each others realms in order to support any particular constructional building needs at time of visit, and an occasional meet-up at the Arvahall Market in order to trade our Tribal Villages produced goods in exchange for much needed goods produced from our allied Rulers Realms. We also have Peace Treaties with 16 other Amazonian Ruled Realms. Hmmm...now that comes to mind, let me show you all our well functioning production buildings run by our very enthusiastic Tribeswomen. Here we have our dated but always put to excellent usage, Hunter, which our Hunter Handmaidens work diligently at carving some of our Tribes Militia of Amazonians tools, weapons, wardrobe and even trophies for our seasonal Tournaments. Karibou, do you happen to have the large order of trophies ready, now that it comes to mind?
"Why yes, my most captivating Chief! Chista! Our most cherished Chief's order of trophies now, please!"
"Why yes, Forewoman, right away!"
Our Royal and esteemed guest, please meet and greet our Hunter's Forewoman, Karibou?! She is shrewd, efficient and very thoughtful in nature. A pleasure to be around and learn from, isn't that right, Chista?!
"Why yes, my Chief! Absolutely! And here are your large crate sized filled order of trophies, my most cherished Chief!"
Ahhh...that is great! I request some to be handed out to our Royal guest present, now please, but only if it does not interfere with your current work orders, my most hospitable Hunter Handmaidens?!
"It would be our honor to serve your Royal guest at this very moment, my Chief! My Hunter Handmaidens, distribute our most courteous Tribal Chief's order of trophies till every guest has one on their person!"
"Yes, Hunter Forewoman!"
"Yes, Hunter Forewoman!"
Ahh...so you are here today, our Hunter Handmaiden Taigi! How pleasant to see you! And Grey Wolf?
"Great gratitude to you, my Tribal Chief Kamali! And yes, Grey Wolf is here as well! After the distribution of some of your ordered trophies, would you like me to give you a piece of deer meat to feed him, my Chief?!"
Mmm...much obliged, my hardworking Hunter Handmaiden...and much gratitude for your consistent generosity!
"Well, I am dedicated to being grateful and obliged to you, my Tribal Chief!"
"My Chief, in the meantime, please, let me show your Royal guests who've already received their trophies some of our handiwork that's currently in progress, yes?!"
Mmm...that would be wonderful! By all means, my Royal Comrades, those of you who already have a gifted trophy on your person, please, follow our Hunter Forewoman on her well informative fun little tour? And don't worry those of you with the nervous energy emitting from your being at the site of our Hunter Handmaiden Taigi's Grey Wolf! He only attacks on her command, and as long as you are respectful and non-provoking, he is tame as a sweet pup...Hee hee heeh!
"Our Tribal Chief speaks the truth, as always! Ahhh...great! Thank you for taking out the last of the trophies and distributing them to our Tribal Chief's Royal guest, Chista!"
"Mmm...of course! I am much obliged, Head Handmaiden Taigi!"
"I'll be right back with that deer meat for you, my charming Chief!"
"So as you can see, our currently staffed Hunter Handmaidens are crafting some Oracle bones for our Tribal Village's Director of Science and Sorcery: Rasika Nandrubar. And yes, she is highly effective...mainly when she is working inside of her Laboratory. Even so, I strongly advise you not to ever cross her, aha hah hah haa! And over here, you can see my Hunter Handmaiden Chista's skilled technique on these chain of teeth necklaces, which happen to be our most popular item with both our Tribal Villagers and our Tribal Chief's Royal Tourists! Yes...you would like to buy this? Well of course you can! Just one for you? No? Ahhh...three it is then! And for you? Five? Alright! And you, your Highness? Ten? Very well! Did I miss anyone? Oh yes...you would like, fifty?! My, that size of an order will take a little time to produce, but...oh, you'll be staying at our Tribal Village's Tavern for the night you say? Well that's marvelous! We can special deliver your order to your Tavern room for you then, your Lordship! Excellent! I highly suggest the Mead once you're at the Tavern, for it's the most expensive yet rarest mead around. Deliciously addicting, yet strong enough to make you wonder if you should should have another round again. Most of our Amazons drink plenty of it, yet their both their mental and physical skills remain in tact as if they never even had a sip...! Well, please come this way so you can make your purchases and have them warped, your Highnesses! Chista! Since Taigi is momentarily occupied with monitoring Grey Wolf's interactions with our Tribes Royal Guest, and since it's your handiwork, I'm sure you'd be pleased to tally up these chain of teeth necklaces accordingly and charge the correct amount, including the proper discounts for the Rulers with 10 or more..?"
"Yes, my Hunter Forewoman! Indeed I would be most pleased to serve our most cherished Chief's Royal guests!"
"Wonderful, my honorable Handmaiden! Now, for those of you who are still interested in continuing the tour around our Hunter, please, follow me this way, your Majesties?!"
You see?! Isn't he grand?! If Goddess willing; on my next visit here, I'll bring a small sweet hare caught from one of our Amazon Huntress' for you...right, Grey Wolf? Would you like that? I bet you would...? Yes...?! Oohhh...your coat is so soft and glistening! Does our Hunter Handmaiden Taigi keep you well groomed?! She does...doesn't she?! Oh yes she does...! A..aa...aackhhmmm...well, ahh...your turn, my Royal guest! Just calmly pet him...yes, just like that! You see?! He warming up to you already!
"Much gratitude for your patronage, your Liege! Yes, I understand that highly, for I've heard that numerous times from several different tourists visiting our Hamlet. These chained teeth necklaces that we craft are indeed a rare find these days... Uuuhhh...it makes me a little sad...thinking about it. For a long while now, I've been wishing that our highly regarded Hunter's Forewoman would recruit a youngling from our Tribal Village School. But alas, there aren't any younglings interested in learning and continuing the craft."
"Actually, I've recently heard talk amongst some of our Elder Tribeswomen. They've mentioned two youngling twins that are undecided on which career lessons they'd want to take up once they reach of age...which is coming soon, mind you."
"Oh!"
"Yes! They also said that these twins are contemplating on training to be a Craftswoman at the Pottery...or training to be a Handmaiden here at the Hunter."
"Oh, wow! That would be marvelous if they'd choose to train as a Handmaiden! If not both, at least one of them!"
"Well, I wouldn't get too excited yet, Chista. According to the Elder Tribeswomen, they sound like whatever career path they decide to choose, they want to do it together. Hahh! For that matter, I wouldn't be the least bit surprised that they're taking so long to decide on the account that one is probably more geared to being a Pottery Craftswoman and the other more geared to being a Hunter Handmaiden..! Hmmphh...to be a youngling again...hah hee heehh! I sure miss those days! I had a lot of ambitious dreams, some of them not meant for me, since I was too reckless to achieve them, ha ha haah!"
Well, we're glad you're able to say that, Taigi. We, on the other hand, are not capable of saying or feeling such joyful longing for the time that we were a youngling... Losing our Maternal was devastating...even though trained and prepared well for life and death...her's was not one we foresaw or even envisioned. To us, she seemed almost immortal...so her uncanny death in battle was not digestible. And life only grew harder from that point on...
"With all due respect, my most cherished Tribal Chief Kamali, our late great Chief Imala was of immeasurable skill and wisdom in leading, protecting and providing for our Tribal Village... And so are you! For within that brief period of raising you up, until her untimely demise, your ability to take on the immense responsibilities that soon followed...how you've endured and at a pace that greatly surpassed any and every expectation that was placed upon your youngling shoulders, as if they had the strength of a mighty bears..! Because of all this, you have proven that your Maternal's Legacy lives on in you! I hope that I have not spoken out of term, for if so, I shall gladly take my punishment, for it's worth the opportunity to share this reminding fact with you, my Tribal Chief..."
Hmmm... Listening to you speak like that...with such passion and honesty, has me thinking... I suppose it's the root reason why we maintain this dated Hunter along with it's surrounding Huts; which only our Elder Tribeswomen occupy, for they too have spoken to me on occasion in similar manner as you have just now. Hmmm...you know, it was our late great Tribal Village Chief that had this Hunter and all these Huts built during her reign. Perhaps my desperate need to cling to her Regal memory keeps me from having our Royal Buildings Advisor: Eranikus go on a wild construction frenzy here. But in addition to over hearing your enthusiasm for wanting the skills of a Hunter Handmaiden to continue on with our Tribes next Generation, Chista, has me feeling a profound joy and acceptance that I have truly made the right decisions as Chief Ruler of our Tribal Village.
"Chista! Please tally up these two coyote pelt blankets for our Chief's Royal generous guest?"
"Yes, my Hunter Forewoman!"
"And Taigi! You can package them up artfully, as I handle the charge, since I'm done with the tour."
"Yes, my Hunter Foreman!"
I am most pleased to know that you are enjoying yourselves thus far, my Royal guest!
"AAHHH..! Tribal Chief Kamali!"
"My Chief!"
"My courageous Chief, the horns!!!"
Yes, I hear them loud and clear! Karibou! Chista! Stay together and lock up shop! Taigi! Although you are retired, you are still always welcomed to aid in battle! But in the meantime, I need Grey Wolf and you to escort our Royal guests to the Tavern! Is that understood?!
"Yes, my Tribal Chief! Right away!"
"My courageous Chief Kamali! Here! Take these! So that you may get there in much greater haste, my Chief!"
Much obliged for the fur cloak and weapon spears, Karibou!
Ahhh...alas, my most Royal and valued guest, I must take my leave at this very moment, for that was our WatchTower Guards signaling an alert for an on coming unknown army. I advise you with great earnest to please follow my Hunter Handmaiden Taigi to our Tribal Villages most popular Tavern run by our proficient TavernKeeper: Huawei! It's safest place our Tribal Village has to offer at this time! I do hope this unexpected interruption won't deter you from making future plans for revisiting our Harmonious Hamlet. For we have much more to show and offer you upon your peaceful return!
General Grivas! My steed! Ahhh..!Your agile timing is most impeccable, General Grivus! Amazonians! Commence the Attack!!! Storm On Out!!!" ♀
 
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Greetings Ratspatoot,

My name is Queen RaeSekhmet. I just wanted to say I enjoyed your story about your city. I also enjoyed that you referenced your guild as your family. The game has surprisingly blessed me with some great friends, as well. I wish you great health and continued great friendships to enjoy.

Blessings,
Queen RaeSekhmet
 

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Closing thread since the submission period has ended. Thank you all for the wonderful entries! Please bear with us as we go through all of them (there are indeed quite a lot) and bring you the results and the rewards. :)
 
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